okay so after my feedback on Monday I took into count what miss said about not revealing to much and changing the way the body is found due to it being far to repetitive.
now both the dog and chantelle run off, however as she's running she quickly gets lost and begins to panic
she then trips over
cut to jade shouting her name
close up of Chantelle's eyes opening up
cuts back to Jade and screaming in the background
(sound bridge)(screaming)(back to chantelle)
as she's screaming a hand of a dead body comes into focus ending with the title THE WILLOW
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